good progression since the last review, the analysis tackles issues of representation however greater depth could be attempted. for example you mention black heritage but have not really provided an example.... One aspect could be the current trend for urban UK artists to wear dark clothing, bomber jackets and so on... you might reference this with a google picture of urban wear. The issue of Bell Hooks I think you need to research a little more as a feminsit Bell Hooks identifies several issues one of which is that feminism is connected with race as follows ; The idea that feminism is a struggle to end sexist/patriarchal oppression and the ideology of domination. >The idea that feminism is a political commitment rather than a lifestyle choice. >The idea that race and class as well as sex determine the extent to which individuals are exploited, discriminated against or oppressed. Representation In a nutshell: - feminism is a political struggle to end patriarchal domination and other factors affect this domination, including race and class.
Good progression there needs to be more signposting wrt to the titles of the slides e.g. Mise en scene and name of artists.
ReplyDeletethere is a good use of text (words) however there needs to be linked visuals to help support your proposal.
good progression since the last review, the analysis tackles issues of representation however greater depth could be attempted. for example you mention black heritage but have not really provided an example.... One aspect could be the current trend for urban UK artists to wear dark clothing, bomber jackets and so on... you might reference this with a google picture of urban wear. The issue of Bell Hooks I think you need to research a little more as a feminsit Bell Hooks identifies several issues one of which is that feminism is connected with race as follows ; The idea that feminism is a struggle to end sexist/patriarchal oppression and the ideology of domination. >The idea that feminism is a political commitment rather than a lifestyle choice. >The idea that race and class as well as sex determine the extent to which individuals are exploited, discriminated against or oppressed. Representation In a nutshell: - feminism is a political struggle to end patriarchal domination and other factors affect this domination, including race and class.
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