good overall, but not really enough visuals at the beginning e.g. (what does an explorer look like). What ethnicities could you have included in the video, how will the young audiences 16 - 25 look? There are some spelling/grammatical errors but not many please revise and republish. For theory please expand by including the following Philo (hoodie culture) and Hebdige youth as fun/trouble. currently a high C but could be a B after the changes are made.
good overall, but not really enough visuals at the beginning e.g. (what does an explorer look like). What ethnicities could you have included in the video, how will the young audiences 16 - 25 look? There are some spelling/grammatical errors but not many please revise and republish. For theory please expand by including the following Philo (hoodie culture) and Hebdige youth as fun/trouble. currently a high C but could be a B after the changes are made.
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